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The Winter Walk

Hey, good to see you again. Sit back, kick your shoes off and enjoy the story.

Wintry cold / manzaneda

Wintry cold / manzaneda

It was cold as I walked. Freezing cold.  The wind bit into my skin like icy teeth and cut through my thermal trousers as if they were silk pajamas. I shivered and pulled my jacket tighter around me. Even my ultra-thick high-tech down jacket was no match for the chill, because, unfortunately, it couldn’t cover my whole body. There was no protecting all of me at once; there was always something exposed. It was five in the evening and pitch black outside.

Winter was here. It was cold, dark and lonely.

I wiped a tear from my cheek. The arctic wind swirled around my legs, faking sweetness, trying to entice me to a deadly, wintry dance. ‘Come with me to the woods’, it seemed to say. ‘We two can play among the trees’, its icy breath caressing my neck, tugging me longingly towards the deep, black woods.

I pulled my woolen cap down around my ears to muffle its words and walked on, one foot in front of the other.

In the distance I could see a faint light. Was that my kitchen? Is that where I wanted to go?

I began to walk quicker, my feet more sure of their way. This made the wind angry; it snatched at my clothing, annoyed that I wasn’t up to its game. The snow closed in around me, enveloping me in its arms, inviting me to stop and rest for a while. Inviting me to take it easy and accept the cold.

It was winter. I was alone, cold and tired.

But through the freezing wind and swirling snow I kept my eyes on the light ahead and walked, one foot in front of the other, towards the light. Because deep inside I knew that every difficult path must end and the warmth of the kitchen would not be so welcome if there were no cold and snow to suffer first.

Happy walking,
Lisa

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6 comments to The Winter Walk

  • Lawrence

    What a wonderful metaphor. I know that path, I’ve walked on it too.

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    Lisa Reply:

    Thanks, Lawrence. Haven’t we all walked there a few times?

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  • This story reminds me of a poem I wrote back in college. Of course, mine wasn’t nearly as lyrical or beautifully written as this. Nicely done.
    Michelle´s last blog ..Wildlife Spotting My ComLuv Profile

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    Lisa Reply:

    Hi Michelle,
    You are very kind with your words. This sort of a cold and lonely walk is very familiar to most of us. I’m glad you wrote your feelings down in a poem (which I’m sure was very lyrical, as you write very well) – writing seems to be a good way to work through and sort emotions – at least it is for me.

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  • Hi Lisa
    Your walk you described as cold, lonely and dark with an angry wind sounded to me like a lyrical picture of an amazing experience in which you arrived at the light.
    Oh, the power of how to receive words.
    Thank you Lisa as I desire to continue to receive words in another light, a more loving light.
    Wilma Ham´s last blog ..Only acceptance has you do things differently. My ComLuv Profile

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    Lisa Reply:

    It always remains the light that pulls us closer, isn’t it.

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